Expedition Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Expedition

Rating: 5.0


Riding on wishes of dear ones,
Gliding through imaginations,
In company of P.H. fraternity,
I have touched the age of seventy.


Enjoying cruise in the life ocean,
Amassing veteran jewels as companions,
Taking life in it's stride cheerfully,
Let meaningful be this Expedition.


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Wednesday, August 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday greetings,dears,life,lifespan,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After cruising through VAT 69 for a year, today I am stepping in the age of 70.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev roy. 05 September 2019

It will definitely be meaningful and cheerful......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 05 September 2019

Let meaningful be this Expedition........lovely representation.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 September 2019

Expedition with PH poets has been wonderful experience over the years. You have expressed it well. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 September 2019

An inspiring write, sir Ratnakar...10+++

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Practicing Poetess 02 September 2019

Happy Belated Birthday, Ratnakar. I didn't know! It sounds as though your fellow poets on PH are among your favourite gifts and presents! : -)

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 May 2020

Life is likened to an adventurous quest in your enjoyable poem. Its enthusiasm is catching.

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Susan Williams 24 October 2019

I enjoyed the use of the word expedition- -we should live our daily lives with the attitude of an expedition into unexplored realms! ! ! Excellent!

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 October 2019

You have been living the life with undying hope and in peace. You have an positive attitude towards living this life. You are blessed. 'Enjoying cruise in the life ocean, Amassing veteran jewels as companions, Taking life in it's stride cheerfully, Let meaningful be this Expedition.'... is so nice. Loved this. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2019

Part - 2 Thanks for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2019

It is a brilliant poem based on metaphor on occasion of your birthday. The beginning lines are most touching that I like to cite here....Riding on wishes of dear ones, / Gliding through imaginations, / In company of P.H. fraternity, I have touched the age of seventy. So fantastic. May God bless you abundantly. May the next life after seventy be cheerful ever.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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