'E# Of My Heart' Poem by Utsav Patel

'E# Of My Heart'

Rating: 4.9


A song in your sacred veins...
Lyrics in your sapphire eyes...
Tune in your windy hairs...
Beat in your tiny heart...
Rhythm on your juicy lips...
You're E# of my heart...

Tapping on your nose..
Plucking on your chicks...
Acoustic sound of your throat...
Metal sound of my heart...
Featuring together...
Rhythm of divine..
You're E# of my heart...

Pain of separation..
Breakdown in depression...
Burden of existence...
Thousands of prescriptions...
Anguish of awareness...
Promises in thickness...
Heart has been deny...
Still you can fly...
You're E# of my heart...

You deserve the best...
I ain't the best...
That's why you're E# of my heart...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to someone very special...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 31 December 2012

how lovely....a special poem for some one special and pretty sure you made that person feel special...beautiful job sir

0 0 Reply
Vijay Sai R 31 December 2012

very nice to read all throughout

0 0 Reply
Lucinda Nightsilver 18 November 2013

it's beautiful but sad.... very good

0 0 Reply
Kishor Pathak 04 January 2013

Written from core...Nice composition could have been better with rhymes...

0 0 Reply
Luscious Larry 03 January 2013

There is no E#. It's called F. I see the guitar so this must be intended. The person means nothing to you then? Or you mean nothing to her/him? Interesting!

0 0 Reply
Chandra Thiagarajan 02 January 2013

Nice dedication to your special -some one.! The flow of the poem is musical.Hope that someone enjoyed it.

0 0 Reply
Sossi Khachadourian 01 January 2013

I liked it, very well done!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Utsav Patel

Utsav Patel

Surat, Gujarat, India
Close
Error Success