Torrent Poem by Utsav Patel

Torrent

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The whiff of affliction passes away.
Do you heard this wobble mate?
where are you peace?
there was no gratitude nor griefs
I believe in geocenterism.
You can occupy your place in heavens.
I am going to the black hole!

'Hallucination'
Smoldering with unconscious state.

In the race of life:
Since I know the meaning of love and life,
I missed the starting gun.

Melancholy ecstasy of isolation:
In a jungle
A 'concrete jungle',
Chirping vehicles and planes.
A groan hikes till the gleam of silence.
Souvenir of death!

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 May 2019

Write comment. An impressive poem, Utsav. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks.

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Poetheart Morgan 04 August 2014

It is about solitude Poet? You have to understand...all poet is alone...I think that is why we have to write....

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Utsav Patel

Utsav Patel

Surat, Gujarat, India
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