Treasure Island

Utsav Patel

(6/10/1993 / Surat, Gujarat, India)

The Beautiful Let Down


'The Beautiful Let Down'

Once upon a time...
There was a boy...
A simple guy...
With simple dreams...
He wanted to be an artist...
But he did a mistake...
He chose engineering...
After he chose he regretted...
He wanted to be with a loving girl...
But she always belonged with someone else...
He moved with that girl...
Thread of lust..
Never went out...
Thorn of love...
Made millions pin prickes in his heart...
He is a normal boy with jealousy...
Ecstasy...
Agony...
He wanted to live for her...
To see her become a successful choriografer...
Too see him as an artist...
But life is harder than it seems...
He struggled...
But he never get success in his life...
Always been a failure...
Excruciating his life...
He was jaded...
Tired of being a looser...
He went to a land of marijuana...
Away from her...
From the world...
From his self...
Away from everyone...
Smokes everyday...
After a month...
He got asphyxia...
Counting his last minutes...
He asked for two more minutes to god...
To love her...
Hug her for last time...
To kiss her...
To touch her last time..
God assented...
She came and couldn't see him like this...
She walked away..
Death is god...
Love is gay...
He shot down his head...
His eyes got close...
He went to timelessness...
He let down the world...
He let down his love....
A beautiful let down he got...

Submitted: Thursday, March 07, 2013

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