Drop Of Rain-Raindrop Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Drop Of Rain-Raindrop

Rating: 4.4


If only I am a little drop of rain
I would skip and jump in every window pane
I will come tumbling down in every leaf I see
I will shimmer and glitter so you'll see me quickly

I will kiss every cheek of bathing boys and girls
I will linger in their lashes as I listen to their giggles
I will run 'neath their toes as they run endlessly
And I'll watch as they gasp for air breathlessly

I will kiss every bud in their sweet gentle smell
Soft pastel blushing petals plus the soft yellow bell
I will greet the busy bee and the big butterfly
As they wait patiently they buzz and they sigh

If only I am a little drop of rain
I will flow with the flow to the seas and the stream
I will tap all the lilies as they twirl when I drop
And glide with the pebbles as they move to the top

Or I will peek silently at a young girl's room
As she writes in her notes her first love-poem
She will sigh she will blink she will smile dreamily
In her thoughts is the boy she loves secretly

Then I will drop from the roof and off to the lawn
And there I will gaze at an old lady...alone
She sits as she sips her coffee at her hand
As she waits for him, her still handsome old man

You're a lucky drop of rain, one lucky raindrop
You visit every place every spot every stop
Leap or jump tumble down flow gently even twist
In my seat i will watch It is you I can't miss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 15 June 2011

I have deleted this poem and re-enter it because of the word dropp which was spelled incorrectly. when I wrote it again and checked, It is still spelled incorrectly which I am sure I proofread it well. hmmmm...i don't know

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Eric Cockrell 18 June 2011

like your sense of joy in this one... it emanates life... keep writing!

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Abhay Vignesh L 16 July 2011

wow...vivid imagination...an excellent poem.....10+++

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Jim Troy 10 August 2011

What a very evident lovely spirit you are.... This reflects a lot about you and is so beautiful to read.. Looking forward to every line as I read.... Very nice A worthy piece of art.............. Jim Troy

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Edwina Truelove 12 September 2011

I love the journey your rain dropp has taken.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 May 2020

Every stanza of this poem creates a beautiful imagery. Loved your exuberant muses on the raindrops.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 May 2020

Every stanza of this poem vreates a beautiful imagery. Loved your exuberant muses on the raindrops.

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Manikandan 06 July 2018

It is a fabulous poem

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Deepak Sawhney 07 October 2013

Naida absolutely beautiful. Juxtaposition is a very fine way of expressing one's feelings (in this case you are the rain drop) . I honestly loved each verse...really very creative :) Hey! dropp should be spelt drop. It still gets a 10/10 from me :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 October 2011

wow.... i can feel the rain...wonderful imagery... I can picture out every stanza of yours..really nice... i can imagine the dew..wow...really refreshing.. i don't know..basta very nice....

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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