Driftwood Poem by Pia Andersson

Driftwood

Rating: 5.0


Each wave,
draws me closer.
Like driftwood,
in search of its shore.

Entwined destinies.

Each wave,
guides me,
into your arms.
You are my shore.

With you I belong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milda Morse 14 September 2007

excellent poem. Has visual qualities. Like the analogy of Driftwood. It is a 10. Milda

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 October 2007

A beautiful verse that reveals one's blind faith and passion for the Almighty. 'A Driftwood I'm' is my poem that claims its importance in this world. Wish, you may read it.

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Zubyre Parvez 14 December 2007

a sweet poem. Agree with prior comment, it seems you have strong faith, awesome.

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Will Barber 25 March 2008

Truly beautiful in form, in structure and in sound. Simply lovely, and inspiring. - Will

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 October 2009

Entwined destinies.......stories hidden in an enunciation......subtle and inetersting i must say...

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2) Further, I note that the poet has left the PoemHunter site long back. It can not justified selecting her poem for the recognition, while ph continue to ignore those poets who are active on the site.

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2) further, the poet has left the PoemHunter site long back and

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This poem published in 2007 is now positioned at #34 in the list of Best Poems of Members. Congratulations to the poet. But I fail to understand how this poem is selected after 16 years of its publication!

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"With you I belong! " Beautifully poetic. A marvel

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 August 2018

Write comment. Good poetry, Pia. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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