Dream Is Dream Poem by Asif Baloch

Dream Is Dream

Rating: 5.0


My love in dream
I see you thee, hand in hand
strolling beside the silver sea

lying on sand glowing as gold
thou art I feel kneeling by my side
I prayed for sun not to rise
and night to stay a little while

on the glowing silvery night
to me once more thy foot steps tend
following together side by side
I plead with yearn to never end

for far and wide our feet have traveled
leaving the marks on my soul
asif, for dream is dream just lie and bold
to keep the grip on hope and hold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 30 May 2009

'I prayed for sun not to rise and night to stay a little while'..what a sweet poem written by a sweet poet..grace

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2009

Your dream is a progressing mind..............unison of your desires! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

that's a nice sweet, refreshing poem indeed...it's a great one in the sense that this helps to get away from the complexities and the complications of modern world..nice10+++ nice expressions too

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 June 2009

Dream is dream but the first step towards reality as well. Beautiful poem, Asif, especially the last stanza. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

A verry evocative poem picture. You are a fine imagist. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Nice work on dream,10+++

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Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

hi asif...very nice poem gifted guy did it very well its ten cheers

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Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

wowwwwwwww dreams of gold on a silvery night i like your antonyms a good write a tenner from me anjuuuuuuu

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