Dreamland Poem by Asif Baloch

Dreamland

Rating: 5.0


Lets go back their
Where I belong
Love filled atmosphere
I stand stiff and strong
Giggles and laughs
Fun filled air
Love and peace
Everything in pairs
Where happiness
Is meant to be
No room for
Despair and insanity
Everyone is in love
Holding hand in hand
Kindness and love
Filled full in there eyes
For those who fell of
Grieve and disguise
Kindness and eagerness
Runs in there blood
They grab there hands
And stand them tall
Where music and rhymes
Are filled in the air
Giving the sensation
Of colorful fair
Trees thou dance in
Slow motion salsa
Daffodils and rose
Plays with inviting eyes
Sun peeks from mountains
And ready to rise
Moon and stars
Giggling, playing
Seek and hide
Let’s go back there
Where we belong
Dreams of dreamland
Where love is all around
Days are beautiful and
Nights are long

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 21 October 2008

We all have our dreamlands of refuge and peace. Very poignant. Ten for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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It is my kind of poem. I love it.. Ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

Let me have some moments in the dreamy environment. Shabash Asif.10+

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Chitra - 21 October 2008

that place that we all call paradise ....utopian concept well penned

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Asif Andalib 21 October 2008

If we want to see this world a better place, we need to dream of a dreamland at first. Then we should try to turn our dreams into reality. I share the same dream.10 from me.

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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

it soothes my mind to think of yr dreamland..i hope we all can turn our mother earth into a place whr love, peace n harmony prevails everywhr :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 October 2008

I could visualize ur dreamland.......so well described.........10

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Egi David Perdana 22 October 2008

sir aijaz this so much touch me, really master piece 10

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Anjali Sinha 22 October 2008

truly lets go to that dreamland where love is all around Days are beautiful and Nights are long. ++++++10 anju

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Seema Chowdhury 22 October 2008

Asif this is a lovle poem full of hope and happiness. i have written several poems on dreamland myself. it is one of my favourite topics. well done. and good luck! !

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