! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! ! Poem by Chrishtiana Reed

! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! !

Rating: 3.3


Why? Why did you say goodbye?
I thought you loved me;
I guess I was wrong.

What made you leave?
WasI wrong? ?

' I love you,
Always have, always will.'

Dont you love me? ?

Please don't go...
For my heart is already ash,
Don't make it disapear..

For your the one whom had my heart,
Now look at it;
There is nothing there....

Don't hurt me anymore! !

If you say goodbye,
I guess i must die...

For youi said those 3 words
'I Love You'
And they made me yours.

You say goodbye,
That's you leaving me behind to die.

Please Don't leave,
Dont say goodbye,
Just come here for a while.

I want to hear your voice,
I want to see your smile,
I just want to be in your arms for a wile.

Just come here,
As I place a kiss apon your lips;
To show you ouyr love is to last ands last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Jadhav 06 September 2011

Very emotional jst touched my heart truly amazing words seem 2 b less

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i love your poem but girl its not the end of the world you will find some one to love you you just gotta keep your head up

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Stefanie Fontker 19 September 2011

Very interesting poetry. I like the emotion here, and the passion. Beautiful writing.

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Uche Chidozie 29 September 2011

thanks for sharing, nice job

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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Beauty radiates through this well penned write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You, Chrishtiana! Keep giving the World more of your brilliant and talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Nikunj Sharma 29 March 2012

Emotion, longing and the zeal. This poem has it all.

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Deep Mukherjee 31 January 2012

it's really beautiful considering your age....enjoyed it :)

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Lexie Bousman 06 January 2012

sad, it sucks to be heartbroken

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Chidori Storm 29 December 2011

This poem is really beautiful. The man who hurt and left you has no clue what he has lost. You are a really talented poet. Your poems really speak to me. I can connect to them so much.

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Cosmic Dreamer 10 November 2011

Love is all conquering... Love is all nourishing... Love is a deeper pain than any man can imagine... This is what your poem said to me... Brilliant poem...

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Chrishtiana Reed

Chrishtiana Reed

Twin Falls Idaho
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