This Is What I Say: Poem by Chrishtiana Reed
This Is What I Say:
The day i die,
Is the day i leave this all behind;
The day when i leave this all behind,
Is the day i say goodbye;
The day i say goodbye, is the day i die.
The day i die,
Is the day u realize;
I love you, you love me
But apearently,
We were not surposed to be.
The day i die,
Is the day you will see,
This is the beginning for you,
But the end for me.
I am sorry,
for putting all this pressure on you;
i am sorry,
for putting this pain on you,
so...
i say the best thing for me to do, is say goodbye,
and to die;
so everything will be just fine.
The day i die;
is the day you will start to listen to what i have been tryin to say,
but the day you start to listen,
is the day that will be to late.
its like your telling the story of a part of my life your talented
this poem was good and sometimes its better late than never my uncle always use to say stuff and i never listened to him but now he is gone and those sayings are all i have so they keep me motivated
You 're talented keep on writing what u feel.. cuz that is the best at u :)
Emotion floods this poem and washes over it's readers. Good job!
wow i really love this one very dark feeling of how relationships turn and how people wont try to change til its to late or wont notice someone til they're gone.... but young love aint worth it :)
That was good one Chrishtiana (am i spell it right lol) , in a repetitive one you share non repetitive emotion, but all just bitter sweet and it sum all as a nice writing, keep it up Cheers_Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:21:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
very good, very well writen i like it