(unvain Love) Poem by Chrishtiana Reed

(unvain Love)

Rating: 2.6


I know what pain is, alot of people do. i hate to see people leave this world just because their love for one another was not true. It brings me heartache to see my friends in vain, to see them not the same. But one day will come when all the broken hearts become renewed and find a love that is true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hilton Ball 29 June 2011

i like this one allot and love is nothing nice but trying to love is hard to do when the other person does not seam to care about you

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Chidori Storm 29 December 2011

Most people have no clue what true pain feels like. They say they do, but they more than likely don't. They don't know that true pain comes from loss and broken hearts. Your poems prove that only a few people, including you, know what true pain feels like. I love your poems. Don't stop writing.

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Preston Simmons 30 October 2011

This poem is great! I love the opening line! It also shows that you care for your friends, to have heartache to see them in vain.

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Bella Hernandez 30 October 2011

something everyone with a broken heart longing for nicely written ~Bella

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Dylan Gaudreault 04 October 2011

i like this poem im feelin' it, keep writing i enjoy reading stuff like this

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Azrael T. 11 July 2011

I like this poem you wrote. I know how what you wrote feels. But you wrote this very well :)

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