Soumita Sarkar Ray

Silver Star - 3,945 Points (Kolkata)

Divine Plan - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

Reflection of anxiety bunch at every node
Mind gets blocked, no change, no mode
At right time if right things connect
It happens to bring forth the right effect

Lately a surprising bend in the monotony
Has unfolded an upheaval of phase murky
Relishing moments are registering deformity
While senses are drowning in a sea of agony
Half awake half asleep to face this reality
Head churns and turns to run from tetchy
Even dreams paint the pulse of uncertainty

Honour dripped from a place regarded divine
Blown to a distance far to bring a shine
It’s possible to remain inactive and still
This shall stand to disregard the holy will
One incident follows the other in a plan
Deeds righteous to do as ordered to man
Hold the present realm for a flourishing future
A task assigned from heaven you have to nurture

Poet's Notes about The Poem

clearance of a cluttered mind before starting a new project.......

Comments about Divine Plan by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Silver Star - 3,945 Points Soumita Sarkar (8/30/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    We must hope for the best............Farah. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (8/24/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    At right time if right things connect
    It happens to bring forth the right effect..u r right and am agreed too but Soumita dear if every time everything going on right then who could make mistakes, how we could gain experiences..hmm
    though besides all i liked ur poem very much..carry on (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/17/2013 4:16:00 PM)

    our minds capture the divine plan. but I do believe there is a moral code for all of us to live by. I love this poem and enjoyed thinking about it's message. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/11/2013 7:10:00 AM)

    Good write.....its Divine plan.....Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Dave Walker (7/11/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    A great poem, our minds can hold so much information. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 11, 2013

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