Distance From You.. Poem by sagar patil.

Distance From You..

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It's better to have distance from your memories,
it makes living tough,
This is that rain, that gives barrenness,
what'll one get by getting drenched,
when you don't wish for me,
where do I have a wish to have you..

I search in the paths
whenever I pass some place,
meet me some time by mistake,
show my eyes your face some time..
whenever I hear any sound of steps,
I shift my eyes to the door,
It shouldn't happen that-
you don't even come n meet me..

Without you I am alone,
I am a moment broken from time..
Don't punish me like that,
Forget my mistakes..

Why do I hope this,
Why do I think this..
I wish that you call me (back) ..
If I am angry...

i l u mgh

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ms u mgh
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indranil Bhaduri 20 July 2013

Beautiful and passionate...

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Kasia Fedyk 13 July 2013

How beautiful Sagar! It is such pleasure to read your poems, so soulful and heart felt.

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Unwritten Soul 06 July 2013

Wonderful poem, so lovely, beautiful and great...i follow your emotion lines with so smooth and nice..great work dear Sagar_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 29 June 2013

forget my mistakes, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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