Disguised Power Poem by Delicate Heart

Disguised Power

Rating: 3.5


The murderer for each melancholic thought.
The stimulus of every Ultimate goal we sought.
It's the spark for every slight beam.
That in our hearts it starts to seem.
When you believe in your ambition.
Noone would stop your expedition.
More than treasure deep inside.
It's too high from each envious mind.
Ambition is the destructive weapon.
To every evil deed that will happen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

excellent and welled poem..i agree with you.. When you belive in your ambition. Noone would stop your expedition. More than treasure deep inside.

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Elsa Bennett 12 June 2009

Absolutely brilliant poem. I love the progression of it, at first it seems you are paying homage to ambitiousness, but it becomes clear further on, how destructive it could be. Nice write, excellent portrayal of the concept.

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