Doomy Life Poem by Delicate Heart

Doomy Life

Rating: 3.9


I live with no peace but wrath.
With pain devouring my heart.
Not everyone feels me inside.
Impediments controlled my life.
So lonesome at night I fight.
To see a beam of joy or light.
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The sun sends life from the sky.
But in the sunset will have to die.
Except my agonies stay to revive.
My weak flesh with another knife.
My spirit has abandoned me.

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MY soul has a broken key.
Time alone will heal my rifts.
With patience to win the gifts.
God knows my deep anguish.
Whom indeed, I pray to extinguish.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 28 April 2009

good job, beautifully written.

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Lalitha iyer 30 April 2009

Oh my dear delicate heart.......sobbing and weeping........you are made for that............oh............poor delicate heart.........

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

the poem speaks for itself..the title is unique u r truly imaginative and expressive! marvelous!

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Jithu Varghese 27 April 2009

Nice write... Impressive flow and style....

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Aarif Ameen 27 April 2009

v good 10+ take care good luck

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Jubilee Dobson 27 November 2021

Everything my heart truly feels.

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Gloria 10 January 2018

Beautiful written i feel it speaks just exactly how i feel

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Austin Morris 11 May 2009

You can tell that this is straight from the heart. A very powerful poem, which conveys a powerful message. Amazing poem.

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Rosalita Fernandez 05 May 2009

you write so freely and elegantly, free flowing and true,

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<font color =fusha>Amy 30 April 2009

very well written, straight from the heart definately a 10

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