Diary Ke Warq(Urdu) Poem by Yasmin Khan

i did not read this poem as english is the only language i trust myself to speak! but i wanted to send a message to the poet and i was kept from doing it the usual way! so........ Jasmeen, thanks for your two comments on my poems Spelling Isn't Easy and the following poem: 35677625 - Baby Coming....... [good grief....am i THAT old? ; EXTREMELY SHORT] Member: Jasmeen Khan Comment: The poem and the notes both helped to understand that these lines express real feelings of happiness mixed with sadness as it goes together in life that some leaves fall off the tree and some new grow on tip of the shoots. Jasmeen, i like your comment but the conclusion you came to, though it makes some sense, is not the correct one. i am not unhappy that my daughter is to have a baby, but i am not exactly happy either. i'm neutral on the subject in that way, but my daughter and her husband have been looking forward to children and so i guess i can honestly say i am happy for them. they should make very good parents. and if they don't, i shall have to put each of THEM over my knees and spank them! ! ! AND i am not sad at all with the thought that someday i will die. i dont' think people should live TOO LONG, and i look forward to making way for others in this world. BUT I WILL miss some of what life has offered me. well..........maybe i won't miss it. i hope when i die that my mind will cease to work along with my body. i do not believe in soul though i once did and i'm open minded. i also am curious how the world will fare without me, meaning it would be interesting if, before i die, i could look into the future and know it. if i could see the future i might share it with poemhunter readers, but that might not be a good idea! ! ! thanks again. bri

the slant of almond eyes and strum of her treaties signed the pleasure quarters and within her sugar walls, secrets are kept

Rangon key raz titlion key paron ki manind larzate rahey par khabhi khul na sakey...wao sis kiya alfazs tehreer kiye ap ne, u r great poetess Sis

A focused write, good lines, choice words like...lafzon ki girhen...yes, the ones that need to be decoded and untied! ! !