Diametrically Opposite Mentality Poem by Alem Hailu Gabre Kristos

Diametrically Opposite Mentality



Mother

My son is late to night
A bit drunk
He may be staggering
In the dark.
God please return him back
Insulatinghim from thug's attack.

Wife

My husband is late to night
In a bar bewitched by enticing eyes
He may be inviting a tart for a dance!

Please devil throw him to hell
He is enjoying himself
Under a spell!

Thursday, April 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,mother,wife
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Such is their mentality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 July 2018

(cont.) ...AND maybe the wife knows 'something' about the man that the man's mom doesn't! ! i enjoyed your story and your bit of rhyming. to MyPoemList. bri ;) i would use tonight, not to night.

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Bri Edwards 14 July 2018

from an online source: The phrase diametrically opposed means to be completely and directly in opposition to something. i see the 'humor', the mother's thoughts and the wife's thoughts. Question: is the son also the husband i.e. are two women talking about the same man, son to one and wife to another? ? and it seems natural (to me) for a wife to have a different relationship than a mother to the same man. (cont.)

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Kostas Lagos 19 April 2018

Exceptional poem! It describes the two differnt states with a touch of delicate humour

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Alem Hailu 20 April 2018

Yes you are right you have got the gist.Such feedback motivates poets to come up with a similar work.

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