Lento Maez


Dental Visit


The dental visit was in vain
I was prepared to bear the pain
My appointment was at 8 a.m.
Damn computer missed my name
Should I reschedule yes or no
Stay tuned I’ll let you know

Submitted: Wednesday, March 19, 2014
Edited: Thursday, March 20, 2014

Topic(s): life


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  • Veteran Poet - 2,786 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/27/2014 10:17:00 AM)

    While I am reading your beautiful poem, I myself am suffering from tooth ache and perhaps need to see a dentist. But I am a timid person, very much afraid to surrender my mouth to a dentist, for him to do whatever he likes while my mouth is gaped open. I would very much like the damn computer to miss my name as long as the pain is bearable and treatable through conservative means.
    Lovely poem, lovely rhyme,
    Your condition is same as mine.
    Despite the pain your poem is fine,
    Wondering, if I should follow your line.
    The poem deserves 10/10.
    Best wishes, my friend, and take care..... (Report) Reply

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