She Brings Me Peace Poem by Lento Maez

She Brings Me Peace

Rating: 5.0


A sensuous breeze whispered in my ear
All the lovely things I wanted to hear
I wondered if this magic would disappear
Or was it because her presence was near

The breeze persisted to taunt me so
It followed me wherever I would go
I spotted a flower bending low
As if it was trying to let me know

The secret of the sensuous breeze
Was it her essence in the trees
Or her soothing sound she used with ease
Of this I know she brings me peace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Inwalked Bud 05 March 2016

Beautiful, calming, lovely breeze...it refreshes my soul....I can feel it now....Thank you for sharing Lento...

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Lyn Paul 13 January 2014

Love the title. You words are soothing. thank you

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Khairul Ahsan 08 January 2014

This is a masterpiece, a poem 100%! So, nothing less than 10/10. 'I spotted a flower bending low As if it was trying to let me know' -A wonderful observation! 'Of this I know she brings me peace' -Beautiful! Sandra Feldman has said everything that I would say about this poem. The rhyming, tenderness, softness, peace&happiness, all simply superb! I can imagine your happy, peaceful, smiling face as you wrote this poem, and mine too glowed along with yours. This is a great success for a poet. Best wishes, my friend!

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Sandra Feldman 07 January 2014

Your poem is lovely, soft and beautiful, full of tenderness, like a caress. Very inspired and inspiring.

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