Deep Under Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Deep Under

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I buried deep under
All negative thoughts and attitude
That had troubled me so far
Now I feel in sky little star

Life is there to smile
With zeal to walk an extra mile
For self and for companion
To make the strong union

My brethren may wake up
To follow and far up
For new day in life
Even if faced by edge of knife

I shall try not once
But twice, thrice and ceaseless
As it shall then form habit
For unknown people to greet

In this way, the hated may disappear
Shall never try to come near
Love may reign
Good sign indeed

It is good chase
But can bring shine on face
With powerful action
And full satisfaction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2014

relatable Brian Collier9 minutes ago I see a true understanding in this pieces.. nicely done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2014

deep under c k13 minutes ago like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2014

I buried deep under All negative thoughts and attitude

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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