Death (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Fate is often cruel...Anger fills the void..You have concluded the first two with strong statements....my answer to your question in the third one is...'they are let alive only to be punished severely....sensible write....and I feel sorry for that friend...thanks for sharing this

life teaches lots of lessons, but some questions remain unanswered. thoughtful Senryu, Sandra love Mamta

yes, the grief and pain leaves one devastated.

This is an excellent senryu triplet, Sandra, perfect in syllable count in each poem, and very well expressed as well. Though not the most pleasant of subjects, you wrote three very impressive senryu poems. Carl.

lovely third verse...really do not know..what god want's to proove

I loved the poem it help me with my project thanks

death doesn't choose, does it?

Why indeed Sandra, life is most unfair, 10 for you Lynda xx

Who can know the secret of this paradox of life? ....Wonderful poem.......10+++++

Why do the good guys Have to suffer and die young While the crooks survive This fact really hurts me too. Great write.10.