Depression (A Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Depression (A Senryu)

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Depression results
When ideas are supressed
and feelings ignored

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 29 September 2009

Sandra, very profound haiku. Loved it. Regards, Ian

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 September 2009

VERY TRUE SANDRA....SOMETIMES YOUR IDEAS WOULD BE SUPPRESSED WITHOUT EVEN BEING EVALUATED OR YOU WOULD NOT BE TOLD 'WHY? '...AND THAT DEFINITELY DEPRESSES GENUINE THINKING PEOPLE WHO WOULD USUALLY APPRECIATE ANY GOOD IDEA FROM ANY ONE...THIS IS A POWER GAME...LOVELY SENRYU...VERY PRACTICAL...EVERYBODY CAN RELATE TO IT

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Ken E Hall 29 September 2009

The reason solved before our eyes so true, you hit the nail on the head regards

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Carl Harris 29 September 2009

Your senryu on depression could not have been expressed any better, Sandra, for every word you said is quite true. Carl.

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Patti Masterman 29 September 2009

This reminds me of that recent study that came out; the more responsibility and less control you have (in other words, being a worker bee but having no say) the more stress can cause all kinds of problems. Great words of wisdom.

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Sonya Florentino 15 October 2009

i agree with Dr. Sheth....supression, repression = depression....but may I add, that it can be internal or external

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Mamta Agarwal 15 October 2009

true Sandra, succinctly put. good senryu love Mamta

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Alison Cassidy 13 October 2009

I get the impression there may be a personal dimension to this one. Truth expressed succinctly and clearly. Great read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Anand Madhukar 13 October 2009

True, very true. Well expressed.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 October 2009

de[ression defined well

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