Death Poem by Crazy Vampire

Death

Rating: 5.0


death, how lovely it sounds
if only i was the one it found
it doesn't take much for your life to end
especially when you are isolated, and have no friends

how should i do it? i want to know
don't try to help me, your chances are low
this is not something i can just wake up from
i will no longer run

everything from me has been taken away
this action, i will not delay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Konstantin Filipov 17 May 2010

We all sometimes feel like we do not belong in this bleak world, some of us stay longer in darkness, the others escape from it faster. A really nice poem.

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Rijad Islamovic 12 May 2010

my favourite subject 'death'.... this life ain't worth living...... love it :)

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Michael Brock 20 April 2010

Good use of emotional energy and intense with imagery. Isolation, a good visual thanks for sharing michael

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D.J. Ray 14 April 2010

isolation is the core of all problems...

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D H 28 March 2010

Death I really have in mind Isolated I am confined It leaves me thinking How's life with no friends for i am to am isolated keep on writing

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Crazy Vampire

Crazy Vampire

Hemet, California
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