Dear Lord... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Dear Lord...

Rating: 5.0


Help, the world survive.
Touch us all, deep inside.
Help, us come alive..Through You!
So much pain out there.
So much that isn't fair, so many
too scared, to try. Let us, feel
Your light, so warm and bright.
Help us see, with your sights.
Waters are cold, dark and wide...
Currents strong, bridge narrow,
and long... Help Us Hold On! ! ! ! !
Help, us reach the other side.
Help, the world to survive...
.....No Anger.....
...Judgement...
.....Hate.....
Help us reach out, before it's
too late! Hand in hand...
Help, The World Survive! ! ! ! ! .....
Please! ! ! ! ! Amen.

Tuesday, January 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,compassion,god,gratitude,love,peace,unity,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 10 January 2018

Rebecca, such a heartfelt prayer...10++++

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Kim Barney 10 January 2018

Amen. Thank you, Rebecca. Great sentiments and well done.

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Bill Cantrell 10 January 2018

Blessed are the meek for they shall inherit the earth, your love and compassion radiate in every word, in spite of current affairs we will one day be blessed with peace but not by mans hands. I truly enjoyed your poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 11 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Robert, For Such And Ever So Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Whisks One Away! ! ! ! ! To Oh, Such A Fascinating! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Place! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)

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Rebecca Navarre 11 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bernard, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Beautifully Powerful Poetry! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 19 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Dillip, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry So Beautifully Paints! ! ! ! ! So Beautifully Describes! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Heart Inside! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

A sublime piece of poetry penned from heart! My favorite lines: Let us, feel Your light, so warm and bright. Thanks for sharing....................10

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Jeanette Telusma 16 January 2018

So beautifully written from one with a golden heart. A petition from the poet to God on behalf of others. Thank you ever so much for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 January 2018

Thank You! ! ! Susan, For Your Words So Beautifully Kind! ! ! ! ! Always Touching Heart And Mind! ! ! ! ! .. :) ((Your Poetry)) Holds Words Of Beauty! ! ! ! ! Words Of Gold! ! ! ! ! With Beautiful Inner Light! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Heart And Soul! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :) My Friend

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Susan Williams 13 January 2018

From your lips to God's ear. Your poem reveals that you are comfortable in talking with your Creator and with petitioning Him for the sake of others. Your poems often reveal your love for mankind and for God which fulfills the new commandment Jesus gave us. Beautiful and passionate prayer .Stars and stars and stars shine on this.

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