Darkness May Not Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Darkness May Not

Rating: 5.0


She was standing alone
Under the tree and feeling lonely
There might be some personal reason
Yet she was all alone in person

Something might have gone wrong
Or she might have preferred not to remain among
Some of the reasons are known
The girls shed tears and own

For long time they feel pain
Prefer isolation and remain
Mix with no one and share nothing
This leads to change of behavior for something

They can not cry even
Can not disclose and bear the shock all of sudden
This is odd situation
They are feared of bad reputation

Something might go wrong with no good
It is not easily understood
It becomes unbearable pain
They are forced to suffer again

Darkness may not remain forever
Sun shine may again appear
That shall show bright way ahead
Think of it in mind and positively lead

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Isolation Juan Rivera7 hours ago Something in this poem was left out? how the poet knows a woman's heart? Not so, very rarely does this actually happen... Comment 1 Comment+1 Juan Rivera7 hours ago Maybe she just did not feel good, we all have crosses to bear so to speak, what lies beneath can never be known by a simple observation... Perhaps a death? Let's hope not worse... Went from she to they? I just got lost...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Comment +1 . E.J Marshall7 hours ago pretty solid, man Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Nice Joshua Collins7 hours ago I really like this one! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 March 2014

The poem represents the pain women undergo in the society. Stagnating as it is. Women need an outlet. A topical poem.Nicely done. meenas17, Malaysia Mar 01,2014 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Very positive thinking 28 Feb by Ginger Blue to Darkness may not

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Like 28 Feb by Ginger Blue to Darkness may not

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

Ginger Blue Very positive thinking 3 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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