hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,594 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Darkness May Not - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

She was standing alone
Under the tree and feeling lonely
There might be some personal reason
Yet she was all alone in person

Something might have gone wrong
Or she might have preferred not to remain among
Some of the reasons are known
The girls shed tears and own

For long time they feel pain
Prefer isolation and remain
Mix with no one and share nothing
This leads to change of behavior for something

They can not cry even
Can not disclose and bear the shock all of sudden
This is odd situation
They are feared of bad reputation

Something might go wrong with no good
It is not easily understood
It becomes unbearable pain
They are forced to suffer again

Darkness may not remain forever
Sun shine may again appear
That shall show bright way ahead
Think of it in mind and positively lead


Comments about Darkness May Not by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/1/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    The poem represents the pain women undergo in the society.
    Stagnating as it is.
    Women need an outlet.
    A topical poem.Nicely done.


    meenas17, Malaysia
    Mar 01,2014


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  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 7:53:00 PM)

    Very positive thinking
    28 Feb by Ginger Blue to Darkness may not (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    Like
    28 Feb by Ginger Blue to Darkness may not (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 5:59:00 AM)

    Like
    4 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 5:59:00 AM)

    Ginger Blue
    Very positive thinking
    3 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 5:41:00 AM)

    Nice


    Joshua Collins7 hours ago
    I really like this one!
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  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 5:41:00 AM)

    Comment +1
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    E.J Marshall7 hours ago
    pretty solid, man
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  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 5:40:00 AM)

    Isolation

    Juan Rivera7 hours ago
    Something in this poem was left out? how the poet knows a woman's heart? Not so, very rarely does this actually happen...
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    Juan Rivera7 hours ago
    Maybe she just did not feel good, we all have crosses to bear so to speak, what lies beneath can never be known by a simple observation... Perhaps a death? Let's hope not worse... Went from she to they? I just got lost... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 7, 2014


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