On a clear starry night,
I was cordially invited
To a celestial party
Where my presence was a must
And of course, I gladly attended…
In this exciting party,
I was honored to dance
With all the beautiful stars
While the angels
Happily played
In the background!
Time passed rapidly
And we were having so much fun
But I notice that the Moon
Was completely possessed
By a rage of jealousy
Since she wanted to dance with me!
Politely, I excused myself
From all the stars
And I started to dance with her!
We danced all night long
Until the Sun arrived
And with a big and bright smile
She said to me: 'What a party',
Which I replied: 'Darling, you are right'
'Let's do it again another night'
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that is not celestial but so human and on your way, again, so poetic! ! ! Dance with the moon! ! ! Beatiful! ! !
I really enjoyed dancing with the stars. It is BEAUTIFUL. I went on a journey while reading! Love it! Bravo! ! !
I really enjoyed this beautiful poem as if i am also dancing with all the stars on the celestial stage. wonderful imagination brother. May god bless you to write more and more. regards,
Superb poem, Romeo. Love it. Tonight I will attend the party Fantastic
Moon struck dancing angels and stars its got it all, imagination has a fling as only you can bring Romeo...regards
Great imagination, you paint a wonderful picture with your words, inspired write!
Truly beautiful and touching. Yes, you have described the dream most everyone has. You talked straight to your readers. Very well done!
You've taken me there already with this poem. I can see the stars too, glittering more happiness to my heart. Please more of this imagination. Thanks
may you find her tomorrow as you pass her on the street and may true love find you as you melt at each others feet
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful celestial affair rendered splendidly, nice write