Compensating Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Compensating

Rating: 5.0


Feeling lonely and alone, knowing my friend is
talking on the phone to someone he can talk to
any time.

Yet, I will be leaving Kolkata soon and he doesn't
seem to want to speak to me, writing to compensate
feelings of abandonment, poetry continues to flow
unheeded.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Feeling sorry for myself in India for a moment in time, not wanting to leave this beautiful country for it has become a part of my being.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sriranji Aratisankar 18 May 2016

Shawiak We are all with u. Why do u feel alone? U have nicely narrated you feelings in your poem. Thank you. I include u in my friend list at the same time request u to go through my poems. Thank u. All the best.

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Raj Vikram 17 May 2016

Pithy and touching. Fantastic lines

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Raj Vikram 17 May 2016

Pithy but touching. Fantastic lines

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 May 2016

Poetry is the best possible medium a poet can use to give vent to his emotions and feelings as also different moods. Thank you for sharing the beautifully conceived meaningful poem.10 points.

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