Come To Me Fickle Words Poem by Chris G. Vaillancourt

Come To Me Fickle Words

Rating: 4.4


Come to me fickle words.
Lift the weight from
my mind.

Let it flow free. Be free. Be renewed.

Lead me to a place of solitude
where I might recreate the
flow of energy
through a
tunnel of doubt.

Flavour me with the spices of growth.

Let it flow free. Be free. Be renewed.

I am not hearing a word you say.
I am not listening.
I will not concede a single compromise.

Not anymore. Not anymore.

So be it as you wish it. You who demand
I make a contribution to the
flippant hall of pain.

I will not live here.
You cannot force me to feel
or to
be an image
of a shadow.

I am just me. I am just me.

Come to me with malice in words.
Strike me. Emotionally batter the
core of my soul.


I will not attempt to correct you.
Make up your visions
as you see fit.

Leave me alone.
I don't want to play anymore.

We put our play money down.
Our game had ended.
Neither of us won.
Neither of us lost.
Neither of us knew what
the outcome was
supposed to be.

Breathe on me the breath of silence.

I will become quiet.
I will shut myself
into the label you have
modified for me.

I am a memory for you.
You are a stranger to me.

Let me go. Let me flop myself
into a comfortable
position.

I am not a broken toy.
I am a broken man.
Come to me with your dagger
at the ready.
Stabbing, you do not seem to
realize you
have been
cutting into the fabric
of our life.

Let it end.
I am waste material
that has been flushed
down the drain of
pretend.

Come to me fickle words. Lift the
black flag from the flagpole
of retreat.

We are dead.
The funeral is yet to begin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 26 November 2015

You whine and expect the world to call it poetry .. Another one too undisciplined to at least rhyme your expressions. At least you do not scrawl on a wall. Having said that you have turned some vivid phrases. You have talent in my opinion. I shall be honoured by a retaliatory response which will no doubt challenge my right to criticise. At least you are not ignored.

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Heather Wilkins 29 August 2013

I become quiet I will shut myself into the label you have modified for me. (and when I get quiet and shut myself off it is over. great write

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Sue S. 16 October 2009

This poem evoked the pain of so many memories of a broken relationship. Well written

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 15 October 2009

You’ve touchingly shown the state of the mind of one that is ditched by the fickleness of the other. When a point of no return is reached, what else can one express better than your words? “I am not a broken toy. I am a broken man. Come to me with your dagger at the ready.” When such a position of numbed hurt is reached, it is healthy to think along these lines: “Lead me to a place of solitude where I might recreate the flow of energy through a tunnel of doubt.” Chris, it’s a 10.

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Susan Horvath 09 October 2009

A brilliant, illuminating piece of writing!

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