Coitus Non Interruptus Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Coitus Non Interruptus

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As Mom and Dad play loves game.
The baby stirs uneasily.
just as the crashing climax came.
The baby settles quietly.
Perhaps the babe is satisfied
and felt the moment of release.
That’s why she slept on. never cried
and let her parents sleep in peace.
She does not even wake to feed
but sleeps right through ‘til morning light.
A perfect child they’re both agreed.
When morning comes all three awake,
they are content make no mistake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 10 October 2008

Ivor a very intimate picture of family life moving on in it's concerns despite baby - a very real and beautifully depicted scene.

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Thad Wilk 02 December 2007

Hi Ivor! Babies do tend to sometimes pick the wrong moment to cry! Nice write! ! ! ! Thad *10*! !

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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