Cleaning Up His Mess Poem by Derrick Thompson

Cleaning Up His Mess

Rating: 3.0


His deep voice beckoned my back to my room
To complete a task I had done before.
But now I was to clean up his mess
As if wiping up his spilled milk.

The warm air filled of musk
I was directed to the fold.
The creamy liquid coating folds I knew well
His large hand, palming my head like a basketball,
Pushed me in to clean his mess.

The briny taste filling my mouth and scortching my throat.
I worked until he was satisfied.
But my labors gave her none of the old pleasure
And the walled echoed with their mocking laugh.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A continuation of the evening in Havana.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Amrutha 25 November 2013

nice work............................

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Saint Cynosure 19 November 2013

WOW...like this a lot...

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Amos Christopherson Masereka 07 November 2013

Cleaning Up His Mess, i like it, its emotional

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