Cheated Poem by Grace Gordon

Cheated

Rating: 3.8


A girl walks down the road,
A flower in her hand.
It's for who she loves,
The boy in the band.
They flirt through the day,
But they never really say.
She reaches the house,
But only to find a surprise!
Another girl has replaced her,
He even dares to look into her glaring eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
purple moon 07 November 2008

A common story, many have been there too. And many will be many a time! if that makes any sense at all..... well done, nicely written in a simple but affective form, the hurt and dissapointment really comes through. x.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 September 2008

I can understand how much pain it is to be cheated....a tender heart in true pain..very well written..9

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Amber ... 19 September 2008

good poem Grace. why did you put down 1954?

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Emily Oldham 14 September 2008

This poem is nice :) ... Thanks Athena

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