Candle’s Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Candle’s Life

Rating: 5.0


Spilling fire orange & blue, untiring spreading lights
I sing and dance with brightening flames.
but very few there to see,
Delights for those besides me
Enjoying surround by my falling droop
I spill light around with vivacious heart beneath,
slowly plummeting by fighting lone battle.
And I kick the flames to make them full of life.
I’m lighted near graves to solace both.
Size is shortening, eventually dying, still timidity far away,
Life no matter, standing alone, still hopes kept alive.
Bravery, valor, heroism- no titles for me.
Patience, fortitude, tranquility finally crusade
I leave a great lesson with message to world 'Fight till the end'
In short time, with my tickling lights I spread happiness forever.

Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fortune,life,patience
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 September 2015

The candle gives the great messages of love to the world.....one of self effacing love! Out of its love for others, it burns itself out! Even when diminishing into non existence, it wages war against darkness and fights till the end to shed light! Through this poem, you have given a message worthy for us humans to emulate!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

I leave a great lesson with message to world 'Fight till the end' In short time, with my tickling lights I spread happiness forever.............true dictum, nicely speculated. It is the life of a candle to provide lights and spread happiness. Marvellous poem. ....10

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Sanjukta Nag 25 September 2015

'Fight till the end'...... a brilliant message carried by a candle. remarkable narration of a candle's state of mind. so heart touching.beyond rating.

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