Candles Of Hope Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Candles Of Hope

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I have kept candle of tears burning in hope,
you will come someday to me.

My body is pumping blood like volcano,
taking breath like hurricane.

I think about you like lightning in sky,
an imagination comes out like waves in ocean.

My foot takes up the flight of an eagle,
hands write about you like the slide from snow.

Ah, when this evening arrives,
dips me deep in 'sea of sorrow',

I think about you & miss you.
Tears come out like falling raindrops,

Loneliness surrounds me like wind,
And I really miss you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 27 October 2015

Nice piece of work, Asim.

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Sanjukta Nag 04 September 2015

Wonderful imageries..... candle of tears burning in hope - remarkable imagination. a very heart touching poem. thank you

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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

A touchingly romantic poem of love's loss being held in the candlelit tears of hope, as winds of loneliness kiss your memory in my mind. Beautiful sentiments in your poem, touches the heart with your sadness. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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M Asim Nehal 23 January 2019

Thank u so much for your wonderful comments Miss Roseann.

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