Call Me Dear! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Call Me Dear!

Rating: 4.5


Call me dear!
Don't leave me alone deep down the woods and go
As I may loose my path without you.

Call me dear!
Don't leave me alone in the midst of this ocean
I may not swim across the ocean without you.

Call me dear!
Don't leave me alone in the darkness of this midnight.
I may not be able see any light to move without you.

Call me dear!
Don't leave me alone in the midst of tears.
I may break down forever without you.

Call me dear!
Don't leave my hand in the mid of this journey.
As I may loose my way forever without you.

Call me dear to your heart!
Don't leave my hand in this journey of love.
Don't leave my hand as I may loose myself forever without you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Padmanabhan Ananth 28 January 2014

Good poem of seemingly dependent lover. But loose must be replaced by lose, I guess.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 January 2014

Don't leave me for I may lose you. Sentiment nicely presented. Thank you.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 August 2014

So poignantly crafted of longing to belong wholly of love..........Geetha.......a great piece with feelings passionate....

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Khairul Ahsan 15 February 2014

An ardent yearning for belonging, for holding hands, for being in touch! Nice poem. 'This member does not allow sending message to him / her.. ' - Why so? I wanted to compliment you by sending a message, but couldn't.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 January 2014

Don't leave me alone in the darkness of this midnight... nice lines....10 do not leave believe each word that is my lifee time work

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Lyn Paul 28 January 2014

Moving words with emotion in every line. Your every word is heartfelt. Thank you

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 January 2014

A very touching and full of emotions stuffed with heavenly things...............Geetha..........very nicely penned

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