hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 55,490 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

By Gloom - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Still I am not taken over by gloom
Life still provides fragrance and blossom
Whether I sit quietly in the four wall room
Or roam out in open with full freedom

I love to be at the feet of nature
I see plenty of birds to assure
My mind rests with many thoughts
Where is animosity and need to fight?

It is same nature with kindness
Why can we bring smile on face?
The nature has provided everything in plenty
Let us thank at least once in a day for almighty

Fresh air, gentle wind and sun light
Above and all river’s flow with water to delight
What else I need to feel as worthy human?
At least I can venture freely as responsible man

The beauty is around to see and praise
Where is need to shout for and level to raise
“Enjoy quietly” the gentle wind whispered
This is all for you people and offered

I look at sky but not with helplessness
It brings all kinds of hope with fineness
There is still hope I n the attitude of my brethren
They too may be feeling same with concern


Comments about By Gloom by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 10:03:00 PM)

    There will always be hope

    Ja'Quan LaBenne2 minutes ago
    As long as Ja'Quan is here.

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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 10:02:00 PM)

    i love it


    John Cornwell2 minutes ago
    i love it
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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 10:01:00 PM)

    Well written


    Levi OguikeLess than a minute ago
    Nice work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 9:50:00 PM)

    Still I am not taken over by gloom
    Life still provides fragrance and blossom (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 7, 2014


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