Butterfly Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Butterfly

Rating: 4.8


Flying high, being a butterfly
sings aloud in deep forests
let me drink the nector to my full
seems which is made just for me!

When I open my Rainbow wings
smiles, feeling elated
heights of that high sky
its that, Now I want to touch! !

~~5/5/08~~

This is the literal translation of my 'Titali'.. for the ones who cannot understand hindi.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidi Writes 06 May 2008

Lets become butterflies Flutter for a whole day Think those memories forever. At times we will recall The ugly worm turning into beauty Its a lesson to us too To overcome the dirt of our mind Get purified as we grow old. Thanks for this feeling.

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Vaibhav Shah 09 May 2008

A beatiful description of Titali.Really a romantic poem in its nature.It sounds similar feelings when Words worth reacts as he sees Rainbow: My heart leaps up When I behold a rainbow in the sky................good poem

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Kee Thampi 14 May 2008

Now ths poet makes it with catch the eyes heights of that high sky its that, Now I want to touch! !

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Ted M 22 August 2009

You paint a beautiful picture on your page, just like an artist on canvas. The beautiful butterflies drinking nectar in the wild with the dense forests and flying high in the sky; you painted them all in just a stroke. Nice...........

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*Trusting You* 17 December 2008

there is an amazing image... painters and other poets feed off things such as this. great job. Crystal

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premji premji 03 November 2008

your pain for translation is really worth..

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Koyel Mitra 18 September 2008

This is a beautiful poem with lovely imagery.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 July 2008

Butterfly is a symbol of love.......fine poem......10+

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