So sorry my friends
I can't make it tonight
If I tell you why
you may give me shyte
Ask no questions
I tell you no lies
But you know (when you having fun)
Time just flies
If I were to tell you
of my cyber lover
from your teasing laughs
I shall never recover!
cleverly penned in an updated poetic style, I give you 10/10 and a smile.
A nice and enjoyable read, An up to date type of thought in the last stanza, thank you for writing, Tia
This is a delightful and quite modern poem and puts the reader in mind of a telephone conversation, Tia. It is pretty well written and expressed, a mirror on modern life as denoted by the internet reference. Very clever. Carl.
wow.. and how did it go? i mean with your cyber lover? ...nice poem maria
Hi Tia. Great piece but I think maybe, just maybe you should get out more. well done. Regards Dave T (not interested in his brother)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
See what you started, now Lorrain wants his brother.10+ great piece Doc