Brown Eyes Search For Blue Poem by Tia Maria

Brown Eyes Search For Blue

Rating: 5.0


As the earth searches the skies above
So do her brown eyes search for blue
As the desert needs the soaking rain
So does she need his love so true
As waters saturate every wanton part
So will he fullfil the desires of her heart
As the moon and stars caress the night
So she feels their love burn so bright

As the sun shines down upon the land
So will her eyes as he takes her hand
As seasons will change forever more
So the land will burst forth in colour
As the rose opens for he to adore
So will she be in arms of her lover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 13 December 2008

Happiness for you, a nice place to be 10 +++ Chris

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Carl Harris 13 May 2009

This is a delightful and wonderfully well written poem, Tia, and enjoyed your excellent phrasing in it quite a bit. I felt bad, though, because you've been looking for blue eyes all this time, and here I have green eyes! So it looks like I've missed the boat again! Thanks anyway, Tia, for this charming poem which was a pleasure to read. Carl.

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

How lovely T, and who might those blue eyes belong to then? Hope you get all the love you deserve, 10 Lynda xx

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Thad Wilk 13 December 2008

I hope soon your dreams will 'come true' an that you find all of the love that you search for - in those 'eyes of blue'! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 December 2008

Like the ocean blue, so deep is the love for you, come my brown eyes dive in and see what I say is true... Andy x

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Goran Gustafsson 13 December 2008

Beautiful poem of love with the nature and the lovers in one eternal emrace

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