Bumblebee In A Crocus Poem by Susy Evelyne

Bumblebee In A Crocus



Great bumblebee crashed out in a crocus!
Dazed among stamens, losing its focus.
Lazing in sun, legs sticking up,
Drinking sweet nectar from a six-petalled cup.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 30 June 2014

What a small incident, as it is; turning in to a deep deep thought provoking poem! Wonderful,

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Stephen Katona 17 June 2014

A lovely poem. I want to hear more about this bumblebee. Any chance of a part 2 or extension please?

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sweet nectar much interested the wording.

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John Brown 26 February 2014

It made me chuckle Susy. A drunken bumblebee eh?

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