Build The Trust Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Build The Trust

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You forgot the to color the yellow
to represent the sun shine and glow
with bright paint to show wind's blow
Sign of gentle movement to show

Paint also the rainbow
That may show fine arrow
happiness on human faces
That is shown among all the races

Each color represents significance
Not realized by al at once
They are mood of nature
Our pride and future

No color can be neglected
As they are never selected
They are natural and interwoven
As if words are unspoken

They are our part
We must force them not to depart
They should stay and inspire us
Build the confidence and trust

We are like strangers here
We must show our presence everywhere
Help out all those have no means
Then only color may have beautiful scene

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2013

Nice work Aryan Long37 minutes ago I the picture it built in my mind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

good Aadeesh Shastry6 hours ago nice poem Comment 0 Decent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

Callum Falconer6 hours ago I think that if you edit this poem a little that it could be improved greatly. But i think you got real talent, ye? .....Good!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 September 2012

You forgot the to color yellow For sun shine's glow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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