Broken Sky Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Broken Sky

Rating: 5.0


When you parted our sky in two halves
It bled white, spreading
The smoky scent of drifted light.
Stars cried tears of Lily petals
Those pricked my skin
Like hails on a wintry morning.
With my blind heart deprived of love
I had nothing to observe,
Only eyes inhaled your promises
Which fell from the cracked sky,
For being wet by
The darkest clouds of desolation.

Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,pain,sad love,symbolic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 10 November 2015

lovely concept with powerful imagination

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

The pain of parting is evident from each word.............Loved it SN.

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Liza Sudina 12 November 2015

Sanjukta, Find another sky! there are so many!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Stars cried tears of Lily petals to have marvelous light in imagery. Wise imagination is interestingly shared in fantastic work....10

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

sad but beautifully expressed thanks -10

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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

Another gem from you Sanjukta.. Again the imagery is synesthetical, which is really, really beautiful. Excellent and touching poem on heartbreak... Thanks for sharing.. ____________ P: S: A happy kali puja to you :)

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