Constellation Of Dreams Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Constellation Of Dreams

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Pillow is pampering the softness
Of your left cheek,
While the right one is revealed
Towards the cold of night.
A smile, so pink like a lustful rose
Is rolling down from creases of your lips.
But the wonder lies inside
Your honey eyes of fascination,
Where bright blue constellation of dreams
Is built like a castle of light,
That shimmers only
With the blushful touch of love.

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,love and art,sleep
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 15 November 2015

Sleeping beauty........Save right cheek from mosquito bite..... Amusing, Ratings u know....

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

A lovely poem, Sanjukta. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Thrilling expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing....10

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Shakil Ahmed 14 November 2015

Where bright blue constellation of dreams Is built like a castle of light, That shimmers only With the blushful touch of love. - beautiful lines, well presented thoughts, thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

how nice to dream of love thanks

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Somnath Chakraborty 22 August 2016

good poem....no....better than good enough

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 31 March 2016

Oh Sanjukta, you have a fascinating art of love embedded in the petals of this poem. Thanks dear for such a nice poem. Subhas

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015

Blushful touch of love. Nice work.

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Souren Mondal 02 December 2015

The poem is too a mild, tender, and beautiful touch of love for the reader... Beautiful Sanjukta.. Simply beautful...

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Hans Vr 28 November 2015

What a superb capture of the scene, the left cheek, the right cheek, the lips and then a magic glance through the eyes into the dreams. Love, love, love. I love the love in this wonderful poem.

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