Broken Heart Poem by Sathya Narayana
Broken Heart
I spread my heart before you
As serenades at your threshold
Straining every vein of mine
Into a tune of melodious love
But …Alas
Glued are your eyes
To the wide blue yonder
Scanning through
The mists of phantasm
Into the Empyrean realm
For the mighty Cupid
To sight you
Get charmed by your allure
Leave his throne to
Alight in a flash
At your nigh
With redolent white lilies
Greet you in gallantry
Kneel before you
Kiss your hand and
Beg for your love! !
Hats off to your hope!
What a risible reverie
You yarned around you! ! !
I vowed a life of serenity
As love’s sole goal
You craved for serendipity
As a whole
Love for you is just
Scrapping at skin deep
While I’m surfing fathoms
My soul for a mere peep
Your castle of love is
No more than a murky muffle
For bizarre nuzzles and
Arousing carousal
But love for me in earnest
An igloo of warm feelings
On a cold mountain
Of odious hail
And a zephyr from high seas
On a hot summer night
That always transcends
The elemental flesh
To touch the interiors of soul
To entwine with thine
Into a divine idol
Our worlds are two
Those can never concord
Nor can I afford
This weird haphazard
Life without love
Of course is dreary
But love razing life
Is really deadly
Sathya……
You use very good imagery and I like the short lines.... very beautiful poem indeed! :)
Dear Sathya, You have done a very good job. I really feel your poetic talent. But I do not like long poem. Do not try to say everything in poem. Keep opportunity for readers to think and feel.
inspiring verses to mend a broken heart...well written...lovely..
the waves that crash upon the beach will eventually wipe it all away......... very well written! ! -bleeding
It is the first time tat my eyes caught ur profile of wonderful poems.. n this is the poem tat i first took a look.. oh man! ! ! ! ! ! u have penned it awesome... its so touchy.// i loved it... thanks for a heart touching poem...
Amazing imagery that is totally stunning and your perception and feel is eloquent as much as your style is. Thanks, arya
I thought this was a wonderful piece. I've read a lot of your writings, but I don't recall ever reading one as well written as this. I was able to cherish every word. So, I had to give it the score it deserves, a 10 . I am also going to list it among my favorites. A wonderful addition. I am thrilled at your success! GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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WOW! Absolutely beautiful. I loved the contrast ans the dept of your conviction about a lasting and fulfilled relationship. Good read poet friend! Loyd