'Broken Heart' Poem by elsee daniel

awww, love love break my heart everytime

Hi Elsee - You are lovely. You cover so much heartach in one short verse - brevity and emotion that is the essence of all POESIE D'AMOUR. Us men are so heartless at times - in the view of all the love our ladies give us. The acts of LOVE speak for themselves in the poem. 'Waited for years' 'To make him mine' 'Nurtured him with my love' (that is anelegant line) 'Raised him to shine' (awesome - our ladies do lift us up and polish us! ') then the betrayal 'Saw him with another Girl' - the bottom line in so many love poems - why oh why do we do it? . The title indicates your HEART IS BROKEN the last line indicates YOUR LOVING & FORGIVING SPIRIT is still intact. 'Wished him all the best and felt everything should be good and fine' - Beautiful! Men can break your Heart - Angel - don't ever let them break you lovely Spirit. I have scored it MAX - its so so lovely! Love in poetry - JOHN.

I can feel the sentiments...nice poem....10

cool poem I like it..... :)

Lovely four lines. Nice words. good to read.

too short but touching and well written :) .waiting for your comments too :) .thanks.

Short anbd beatiful poem i like your style

a great attitude...must hurt the girl inside....

Your strength is beautiful.

hi da, nice dear............. forgiveness is a great love.......dear