True Lover Poem by elsee daniel

True Lover

Rating: 4.6


My heart will allways sing of your love,
And remain pure as a dove.
My love will never fade away,
As i decided to walk in your way
And i hope you to say.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalini Sundararamalingam 12 September 2009

this is a short nice poem, coming out from an innocent heart, nice to read, like a wedding confession.. nice write..

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Manjula Arumuga Nainar 14 September 2009

Hey dear Elseee, This poem shows how much you are dedicated to your love. Keep up machi dont give up

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Supriya Prathapan 14 September 2009

Well thats called true love.

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Broken Heart 14 September 2009

another awesome poem! ! ! <3

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John Knight 14 September 2009

Hi Elsee - another lovely poem about the intensity of young love. I am intrigued by the last line 'And I hope you to say' To say what 'How much we love you - How much we love your poems? ' or should it be 'And I hope you to STAY'? I love open ended poems they are very enigmatic. Perfect 'poesie petite' another MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.

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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

Nice poem..very cute but were saying in the last line say or stay? the word want is it?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2009

My heart will allways sing of your love, And remain pure as a dove. My love will never fade away, As i decided to walk in your way And i hope you to say..well so intense desire and eanest words too.. i could have reciprocated it withwarmth as there is pure and pure feelings only....lovely write andkeep it up....10 read mine...no separate ways....comehome....miss i miss u

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Shelly Shelly 08 October 2009

exactly..a very sweet innocent poem..written with feelings in bulk..

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Brenda Arroyo 29 September 2009

Sweet and gentle and soft :)

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Annabel Sheila 15 September 2009

Once again a tender ode to first love! Nice lyrical flow to your poem. Anna

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