Broken Beyond Repair Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

Broken Beyond Repair

Rating: 5.0


Emptiness from within
Darkness my sin
Wanting to break free
But I can't you see,
I'm broken beyond repair
My soul not to spare
History repeats itself everytime
I can't see any light shine
My wish not to have pain
My wish to not be insane
My wish not to feel broken
My wish not to have a word spoken
My wish not to cry
But really my only wish is to die.
For this life, I have no more care
I am broken beyond repair.

Wednesday, August 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: broken future,darkness,depression,sadness,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Currently having a depression struggle and my psychiatrist recommended I start writing again.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 29 August 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Luzaan de Bruyn. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Michael Walker 28 August 2019

It was a good idea to write about depression, so that you could at least define it. Possibly writing about the topic is cathartic (cleansing of emotion) also. 'Broken beyond repair'. I know where you are coming from. I enjoyed this poem.

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