Broken Poem by Aria Quimby

Broken

Rating: 5.0


I lie here
A chunk of my heart missing

You have left me
And taken a piece of me with you
For now, and forever, I am broken

No longer whole
Hurting inside
Crying to myself

All alone
I am broken

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 April 2012

Outburst of the heart! How many times I have been going through that in my life? But I got back on my feet and moved on (Back On My Feet, just posted) still at this very moment I feel it! Your sensitivity and talent are clearly shown in this short but well penned write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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May Witwit 05 April 2012

We climb, fall, then climb once more. No pain is permanent I assure you. Wish you all the best

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Iniduo Iniduo 05 April 2012

Time is the process that slowly fills the missing pieces.

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