Brighter Vision Poem by Swatimalya Chattopadhyay

please engulf me in my immediate present where I can know only one key word which is 'Brighter Vision'. i read it thrice! once hav recited! my sound is bold! i found -> it the eloquence came from direct heart's core! thoughtful ---> beautiful as your mind........and positive inspiring! 1010101010+

please engulf me in my immediate present where I can know only one key word which is 'Brighter Vision'.'.................................. vision brightest enlightens the path of trudging heart never bewilders by recalling the swing glow of bliss emits light even by storm in darkness soul when needs the room of repose by hue of heaven........most introspective yet passionate portraying the panorama of wholeness by time and space as when to recourse by recall of tunes by uncertainties of mists across mystery intriguing, lucid flow of emotion across transparency of innate quest lodged in transcendence yet not being befuddled in midst of sojourn, eloquently curved in the shadow of curve of meaning, ingenuity glows by the dexterity soulful will, and heart yet listens whispering! ,10+++, thanks for sharing

pray to the Almighty ' O Lord! give me strength to behold only brightness of the things. Let my inflicted injuries out of torments, tortures and disparagement melt away to the shower of love.this is what every human being must strive for entire life..always pray sincerely to God not to blind us from any brightness or glitter...beautiful poem with lod message....10 read mine prayer...... i am disgrace

beautiful...a lovely poem to read first in the morning...one who is close to nature will be in the immediate present...lovely closing lines..i take this into my favs...10

vow! a wonderful poem.you surely have a style. the opening para is very imptressive. voted10 surya

Ambience alluring …beguiling metaphors…added extra psychic levitation…escalation… mystique packed with nascent aurora Nature Mystics are bubbling in beaut premium oscillations…spins around the Archie Nucleus [God] as miniscule electron and carries oneself into Brighter Vision in biddable Divine Wish… congrats for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Poet William Wordsworth [1770-1850] was such a nature mystic n

A beautifully capturing poem, Weaved finely by your pen! Well done; D

An arresting poem, with bright and resonant expressions

A bit long but a fine poem

With the daybreak when the sun ascends and derives its momentum, brightness befalls but emits heat to radiate, I wish to cling to the dazzle of the sun ignoring sultry sweats. sweet alot..I really enjoyed you bright vision and picked up your inner soul and its advanced face in fornt of my eyes..lovely piece of work and the way you think if marvelous..respect you..you deserve..sure 10/10