Bricks Of Guilt Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Bricks Of Guilt

Rating: 5.0


When wisdom weighed me down, I kept mouth shut,
So behaves one of three we call discreet,
Who never fingers of their own would cut,
Who'd let an axe fall upon one's own feet?

One, rather boneless, fumes; from within burns,
Oft blurting out words in impotent rage,
The rope when tightens still, he turtle turns,
Values in life look fine if free from wage.

World's ever been like this, believes the third,
Crows always would come black, why boil my blood?
A trickle soon turns into furious flood,
And how and why of values get nigh blurred.

We oft our own help a burial vault built,
Blissfully blind, we bestow bricks of guilt.
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An impotent little cry this might sound on what has been happening around in many places. Yet, we can blame none but ourselves. After all, we get only what we deserve.
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Sonnets | 04.07.13 |

Wednesday, September 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,courage,guilt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2019

A wonderful write imbued with wisdom. Insightful and perceptive. Liked the title of this poem.So apt for the brilliant thoughts conveyed by the great Poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 September 2019

Thank you dear poet, sometimes I feel the burden of such good words. You being such a good poet yourself, I'm sure you must have something to say against, please feel free.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2019

A brilliant sonnet has been properly delineated keeping a nice title " Bricks Of Guilt" . The concluding lines are much impressive. I like to cite here....We oft our own help a burial vault built, / Blissfully blind, we bestow bricks of guilt. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 September 2019

Thanks for your words of appreciation dear KM

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

Beautiful Sonnet, dear Poet. Full of wisdom conveyed. I have enjoyed this excellent Sonnet through and through. A 10 Full Score and myriad 10´s more. More enjoyment in reading this time and again. Thank you for sharing..Nothing but the truth in your ardent Sonnet. God´s Blessings in Abundance.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 September 2019

Thank you so much for some good words about the sonnet, and 'God; s Blessings in abundance' for me, so kind of you, dear poet.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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