Hebert Logerie

Silver Star - 3,162 Points (Haiti)

Breath Of Spring Air - Poem by Hebert Logerie

Melting snow,
Cool breeze,
Crows diving in a row,
Return of the unfriendly bees,
Rainbow in the sky,
And the songs of the talkative parrot;
These are signs that Spring is around the corner.
Again, she has defeated Queen Winter,
With that incredible show in the parking lot.
She is now wearing the crown and three ostentatious rubies;
Oh my golly! She can also poise better than all of the beauties
Gathered during the Ms.Universe beauty pageant.


Sigh of Lent,
Palm Sunday,
Children at play,
Gardens decorated with confetti,
Humming birds flying high,
And the young grand-mother in bikini;
These are hints that the celebration
Will commence early this spring.
One duck is already being trailed by an offspring,
Meanwhile, the zebras are being chased by one starving lion,
Who can no longer run like a supersonic train.
Amidst all of that, somebody is going to have fun.

Copyright© March 2009, Hebert Logerie, All Rights Reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of two poetry books:
“Sparkles of Love and Etincelles de l’Amour”

Hébert Logerie is the author of “Mounts And Valleys of Love”
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Comments about Breath Of Spring Air by Hebert Logerie

  • Freshman - 618 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/18/2009 11:07:00 PM)

    Brilliant piece. loved it. - (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Deepti Agarwal (9/15/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    Beauty of Spring along with Growing old gracefully.. is all here.. with lovely mention of Queen Winter.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marcella D (7/9/2009 9:23:00 PM)

    this poem is beautiful, I just wish I didn't get sick during spring (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (5/26/2009 11:26:00 AM)

    Springtime scented, colorful, fluent and sublime.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (5/25/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    Sorry I didn't get to answer sooner. The poems I looked at and they are magnificently written. Well versed and have a very smooth flow. Good write on all three poems. Look up my O'er Yon Mountain and see what you think. Its from my book 'Poems from the Heart' published in 2008. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leslie Rodriguez (5/24/2009 8:05:00 PM)

    Definitely me favorite so far from what Ive read...so far.. :) Awesome one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jerry Abrahamson (5/21/2009 5:12:00 PM)

    Great poem. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/21/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    Happy poem with an undertone of the perplexities of aging. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie heatherjean. cropper (5/20/2009 3:40:00 PM)

    I love the spring and I love nature..
    in fact, I was born in the spring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angelic(Annie) Female (5/19/2009 4:25:00 PM)

    Great poem describing nature and its beauty- makes one feel lost into a world of fantasies :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Monkey Bubbles (5/19/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    this is really good, i like the images it gives me! thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (5/18/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    nice vivid write....wonderful.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/16/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    yes..very visual...great imagery...refreshing indeed..thank you for inviting me sir.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (5/16/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    well you said it, spring came and there was happiness. thank you for this poem. it is wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meer Mushfique Mahmood (5/10/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    'Who can no longer run like a supersonic train' reading your poem. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Erica German (5/9/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    hello you asked me to read this poem. i really enjoyed it. thanks for recomending it to me. i think your poems are wonderful. it really speaks to people. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hanaya Sausan Kamil (5/8/2009 1:16:00 AM)

    i love the opening phrase. its beautiful
    really.
    and your rhyme
    comes so naturally
    excellent work
    got so much lesson here. thx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (5/8/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    to read nature and related ones always enthuse and bring in happiness........fantastic write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maya Graham (5/5/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    Herbert,
    Way to go! If I never knew what Winter and Spring was you just hit the nail on the head.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (5/5/2009 7:58:00 PM)

    Herb,
    I've already sent you the feedback on this poem. So I'll reproduce it here once again: ....'Now thats the National Geographic in action in the city! And to live all of this with every breath of Spring is priceless, considering the turmoil in today's world....' Well written friend.

    Cheers.
    Subroto
    [14/04/2009] (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 2, 2010


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